I think what you posted was actually very logical. But, think about this, what if you were to create a awesome headline? I ain't saying your information isn't good., but suppose you added something to maybe get folk's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda plain. You should look at Yahoo's home page and see how they create news titles to get people interested. You might try adding a video or a pic or two to get readers interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it would make your website a little bit more interesting.

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